Who ever said writing porn was easy?

I shouldn't complain, but I've been agonising over revisions to the third Crooked Sabre chapter, The Generals.   When I started this caper I thought great, lots of sex minimal amounts of talking.  Instead within 3 chapters I have a great big talk fest.

I can't quite bear to write the 'I'm here to clean your pool" kind of dialogue.  I know my stuff isn't brilliant, but I hope it has some sense of realism, and says something about the relationship between the characters.   It may sound pretentious, but I seriously think porn is hotter if I believe that there is some kind of real spark happening.  Girly, I know.

I have to hold back the urge to keep jamming exposition in, about the world, history etc.  Yeah, I know, not very sexy pillow talk.  I'm laying out the dialogue over the next few days and then I can get onto the more fun task of pencilling.