I've not been posting
much recently as I have been writing. The next installment of
Crooked Sabre is a full comic length story and I've been trying to
concentrate on writing, as odd as that might seem. Criticising the
plot of pornography is trite, but it is also a bit weak to pretend
that storytelling is irrelevant and porn must always just fall back
on cliches. Thinking about this got me thinking about Elmore Leonard
Leonard's ear for
cracking dialogue transformed many a dull and cliched scene, first in
westerns and then in crime fiction. He can take a dull, by the
numbers gunfight (usually with the kind of “you're going down”,
“you'll never take me alive” nonsense) and turn it into a witty
exchange of quips which, crucially, grounds us in a feeling of
reality and tells us something about the characters. Of course
Quentin Tarantino famously 'borrowed' this style in Pulp Fiction, but
his take was less character oriented and more about pop culture
references, but again this style can disrupt our expectations, make
us see a scene we've seen a hundred times in a different light.
I don't tend to write
dialogue in sex scenes. I've always found dirty talk to be silly and
something that takes me out of the moment and I don't think 'fuck me
harder' or 'oh yeah, suck that dick', really adds anything to the
visual. But writing doesn't have to be about dialogue nor scenario
(Is the pool ever going to get cleaned?) but can be about the
relationship between characters. I know that sounds very chick-lit
but I don't mean the basket of flowers or the “why did you say
that to my parents three weeks ago” kind of relationship, but a
basic focus on the characters as individual beings with motivation,
history, beliefs and desires.
There is a great scene
in a porno that I've seen somewhere where the bed breaks in the
middle of fucking and we get a transition from a fairly formulaic
anal scene to a sudden human moment, two guys with erections
surprised, then laughing and hugging each other. It suddenly broke up
the by-the-numbers scene and said something about these two people as
performers. While it was an accident, I think these kinds of moments
can also be written, especially in written or comics porn. An event,
dialogue, even a change in the sexual dynamics, which connects the
audience back to the characters.
So, where is the Elmore
Leonard of porn when we need him (or her)? I'd like to see porn
evolve, not become 'art' or anything, but just be more self-reflexive
about its craft. It could be that there are creators who are doing
this – I can think of more comics creators than film directors
(comickers like Sean Z, Jon Macy, Steve MacIsaac and many others) but
that might be about the different economic demands of these different
media. If anyone knows of other examples, please let me know.
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